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7/27/2004

 

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Thanks to Lisa Stone from latimes.com's Convention Watch for the link to my little bit on Al Gore's speech last night.

She's very good!

This:
He did it. His veins didn't threaten to cede from his face, and he delivered an upbeat speech, interspersed with small whines.
became this:
"He did it!... he delivered an upbeat speech..."
Her thesis was a tongue-in-cheek "can't tell the Left from the Right" thing.

Me? I'm fond of the link. Thank you, Lisa.

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